http://vimeo.com/109161323
After watching the video, please answer these questions in the comments below.
How did the video succeed in telling the message to be a safe driver?
How did the video fail in trying to tell this message?
What would you do differently to make this video a better movie?
Be constructive with your criticism. Give your advice on how to do it better next time.
Think about lighting, graphics, acting, direction, props, scenery? What needs the most help?
Please write at least 5 sentences.
They should have talked louder. Also make the car look like it was moving. Better camera would be better too. And act better. Also to make a better story/script.
ReplyDelete1. cause everyone was using electronics.
ReplyDelete2. i dont think it fail it was good.
3. the sound effect.
4. speak louder, and act better.
5. acting.
Please use complete sentences.
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ReplyDelete1. better every thing
ReplyDelete2. better sound
3. better acting
4. better ending background
5. better car movment
They could of talk louder so where we can understand what they were saying. If they could also make it look like the car is actually moving that would help. Another suggestion would be if you could angle the camera so we could see the whole scene that would also help. Practice the script more so you wont have to think about the word you could already know. I also think you could practice your acting to make it seem realistic.
ReplyDeleteit should have had better actors.it showed people on the phone while driving.i honestly didnt like it. it could have been better if there were better props.i also think the scenery should have changed more.
ReplyDelete1. it didn't fail cause everyone was using electronics.
ReplyDelete2.well i think nothing fail it was a good movie clip.
3.what ill make different ill give better sound effect.
4.yall can do better next time by speaking louder and acting better.
5.I think acting needs the more work on.
There full sentences.
not to drive went you messeging.
ReplyDeleteto not messege people messege wheen you drive.
the sound effects.
by puting police light in the background.
next time put lightning so like it be raining
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ReplyDeletethey should have more animation but other than that they were good and they should of been a little bit longer because most of them are under 20sec and they should be around 1min in my opinion but thats just me people and do what they care to do because its there movie animation not mine
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